What are my talents, and how do I use them?| English4-lesson 105

Hmm, hard question, But I think I will choose drawing. I love to draw animals like horses, cows, birds, and elephants! I draw to be creative and to have fun!!

I also love to ride horses. I ride horses to have fun. I wish I had my own horse, but for now I just borrow Diesel, but I am sure I will get one or two when I am older. Horse riding is the finest thing in the world! And I wish that cars were never invented, so we can go horse back riding whenever we want! Do you want that? Tell me in the comments!! That’s all for now.

~Emilie

4 thoughts on “What are my talents, and how do I use them?| English4-lesson 105

  1. My suggestions.
    For the first paragraph:
    1. Change “hard hard question” to “that’s a hard question”.
    2. Don’t have so many exclamation marks after “fun”.
    Paragraph 2:
    1. I don’t think you need so many exclamation marks. Maybe one of two. No more, I say. Also, remove the “ummm”.
    2. Change “And i wish” to “I wish”.

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  2. I am glad to have cars so we don’t have to ride our horses all day long to visit someone who lives far away. It is hard on the horse and us. I know what you mean though. it is fun!

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